Assignment

2016-09-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Essay: In today's world, how are animals suffering? What can we do to make sure animals rights are respected? => Their home is destroyed with human development, and we should relize that animals are not our resource to use but our friend.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jacob! ^_^   Thank you so much for answering your homework. Thought it\'s brief, you were able to express your opinion well. Do you have a pet? :) Let\'s discuss it tomorrow. ^^ See you!   _T. Mayleen ^_^//   Their home is destroyed with human development, and we should relize that animals are not our resource to use but our friend. >> We destroy their homes by building structures and destroying forests, and we should realize that they\'re our friends.

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