Assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: What three pieces of advice will you give your children?
=> First, Do not hesitate whether do or not except crime.
Second, Do your best on your work or activity what u chose at least 3 years.
Third, Do not stop learning until die.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Jacob!^^
Happy Tuesday! :)
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I like all three advices especially the first one.
You want your \'children\' to explore without boundaries but to know when it\'s legal or illegal.
You\'ll be a fine father. ^_^
Good luck in you furure endeavors.
Chuseok jal bo nae sae yo!
_T. Mayleen ^_^
First, Do not hesitate whether do or not except crime.
>> First, do not hesitate to do anything unless it\'s a crime.
Second, Do your best on your work or activity what u chose at least 3 years.
>> Second, do your best in you work or activity that you chose for at least 3 years.
Third, Do not stop learning until die.
>> Third, do not stop learning until you die.
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