Assignment

2016-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

Essay: What three pieces of advice will you give your children? => First, Do not hesitate whether do or not except crime. Second, Do your best on your work or activity what u chose at least 3 years. Third, Do not stop learning until die.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Jacob!^^ Happy Tuesday! :)   Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. I like all three advices especially the first one. You want your \'children\' to explore without boundaries but to know when it\'s legal or illegal. You\'ll be a fine father. ^_^ Good luck in you furure endeavors.   Chuseok jal bo nae sae yo!   _T. Mayleen ^_^   First, Do not hesitate whether do or not except crime. >> First, do not hesitate to do anything unless it\'s a crime. Second, Do your best on your work or activity what u chose at least 3 years. >> Second, do your best in you work or activity that you chose for at least 3 years. Third, Do not stop learning until die. >> Third, do not stop learning until you die.

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