assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
What springs to mind when you hear the word 'beach'?
=> Whenever I hear "beach", I think the scene that a few people perform with their instrument near the beach. Actually that kind of scene can be found in my home town.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jacob! :)
That scene sounds nostalgic.
Instead of the view, you imagined people and performers or artists to be exact.
That is really unexpected but I like it.
Musicians and poi dancers/performers are very indemand in scenic spots like beaches, parks, lakesides, etc.
They give a different vibe.
Good job! Thank you for doing your homework.
_T. Mayleen :)
Whenever I hear \"beach\", I think the scene that a few people perform with their instrument near the beach.
>> Whenever I hea the word \'beach\', I think of a scene where there are a few people performing with their instruments near the beach.
Actually that kind of scene can be found in my home town.
>> Correct!
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