assignment

2016-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

What springs to mind when you hear the word 'beach'? => Whenever I hear "beach", I think the scene that a few people perform with their instrument near the beach. Actually that kind of scene can be found in my home town.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Jacob! :)   That scene sounds nostalgic. Instead of the view, you imagined people and performers or artists to be exact. That is really unexpected but I like it. Musicians and poi dancers/performers are very indemand in scenic spots like beaches, parks, lakesides, etc. They give a different vibe. Good job! Thank you for doing your homework.   _T. Mayleen :)   Whenever I hear \"beach\", I think the scene that a few people perform with their instrument near the beach. >> Whenever I hea the word \'beach\', I think of a scene where there are a few people performing with their instruments near the beach.   Actually that kind of scene can be found in my home town. >> Correct!

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