assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Heidi!
You did great in your homework today, keep it up! See you in class!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
1. We can use book pad like an e-book so we don\'t need to bring paper books and notebooks.
>> correct!
And we can save the money not to buy some material.
>> And we can save money in not buying some materials.
In many books case, It is pretty heavier to take than book pad.
>> Most books are heavier to carry than a book pad.
Book pad that can contain thousands of books is possible to show several genres of books as well as we can get lively education when reading a book and doing exercise included song and chant.
>> Book
pad can contain thousands of books so it\'s possible to show several
genres of books. We can also get lively education when reading a
book and doing exercises because songs and chants are included.
2. Everything has advantages and disadvantages.
>> correct!
The worrisome matter is that some of students who might lose interest in and get bored reading Paper books.
>> The worrisome matter is that some students might lose interest and get bored reading paper books.
It is different meaning from fun of paper books unlike e-book. We can get many opportunities to expend my thought and unlimited imagination.
>> Reading paper books is different to e-book. We can get many opportunities to expand our thought and unlimited imagination.
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