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Hello, Heidi!

Thank you for doing your compositions despite your busy schedule. You are a diligent student! Keep it up!

I agree with you! Character building is more important but what can we do when we live in a materialistic world where money and achievements are very important. I wish for a different mindset for the future though it might seem so hard to achieve this.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Education is convoluted and complicated.

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Children learn about many subjects in school but It is mainly obvious to place great importance on English, Math, Korean and science subjects in school than building an upright character, exercising, moral concepts and so on.

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I think It is more worthy and important things to learn them than main subjects.

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I\'m concerned about if important subjects such a moral decrease, we must face the situation of committing crimes, increasing psychopaths, offending other\'s mind without any considerations.

>> I\'m concerned that if important subjects such  moral decrease, we must face the situation where more crimes are committed, increasing psychopaths, and offending others mind without any considerations.

I am very concern about coming this world how can my children live in the world. so I pray to God everyday.

>> I am very concerned about the future,  how can my children live in this world? That\'s why I pray to God everyday.