assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Heidi!
Wow! you are studying a lot of things!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
We are not God so we live in the restrictive world. Naturally, we can have limited opportunities.
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And we have endless desires to get something and we long for getting precious and luxurious like diamond but it is too very overpriced to buy for everyone.
>> And we have endless desires to get something and we long for getting precious and luxurious things like diamond but it is very expensive for everyone to afford.
In order to buy this, we can afford to pay it. I mean the person who doesn\'t enough money can\'t buy any.
>> In order to buy this, we must afford it. I mean a person who doesn\'t have enough money can\'t buy any.
Only most of affordable people can purchase some. So Everyone can\'t always get what you want.
>> Only the affluent people can purchase this. So Everyone can\'t always get what they want.
God sorted us out from where we live, when we were born, where we were from, which parent belong to, which character parents have and so on.
>> God sorted us out from where we live, our birth, where we were from, who are our parents, which character parents\' we\'ll inherit and so on.
According to the personal situation, we are fixed to do by capacity.
>> According to our personal situation, we have our own capacities.
I study another book with a Korean friend every single day in the early morning so I\'d like you to correct my English composition.
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1. What types of discounts do you receive when you buy tickets?
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I usually receive discount on the internet shopping site and social commerce like Cupang.
>> I usually receive discounts on the internet shopping sites and social commerce like Cupang.
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