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2017-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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2. Where do you usually buy tickets? Why do you use that method? I usually buy tickets on the internet. I can get discount online and it is convenient. Sometimes I get some complimentary tickets from my friends and husband. 3. Do you prefer mobile tickets or printed tickets? Why? I prefer mobile tickets because I don't need to worry about paper tickets where they are. After getting babies, it is hard to bring my belongings carefully. 1, What big problem or circumstance in your life have you been reluctant to hand over to God? As for the number 1, It's not reluctant but it's distrustful of help for me to look after my kids. I don't have any siblings and friendly parents. How can God help me to take care of them. It is a big burden of me. So time to time I get a depressed state of mind. 2. How have you seen God provide for you and take care of you in the past. In the past, I didn't have any home, job, good education experience. So I prayed to God to have, so he provide with them to me

강사 첨삭

Hello, Heidi!

See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

2. Where do you usually buy tickets? Why do you use that method?

>> correct!
I usually buy tickets on the internet. I can get discount online and it is convenient.

>> correct!
Sometimes I get some complimentary tickets from my friends and husband.
>> correct!
3. Do you prefer mobile tickets or printed tickets? Why?

>> correct!
I prefer mobile tickets because I don\'t need to worry about paper tickets where they are.

>> I prefer mobile tickets because I don\'t need to worry about misplacing the paper tickets.

After getting babies, it is hard to bring my belongings carefully.
>> After having babies, it is hard to organize my belongings.
1, What big problem or circumstance in your life have you been reluctant to hand over to God?

>> correct!
As for the number 1, It\'s not reluctant but it\'s distrustful of help for me to look after my kids.

>> For question number 1, I\'m not reluctant but rather I don\'t trust other people to look after my kids.

I don\'t have any siblings and friendly parents.

>> correct!

OR>> I don\'t have any siblings nor am I close to my parents.

How can God help me to take care of them?

>> correct!

It is a big burden of me. So time to time I get a depressed state of mind.

>> It is a big burden for me so from time to time I get depressed.
2. How have you seen God provide for you and take care of you in the past?

>> correct!
In the past, I didn\'t have any home, job, good education experience.

>> In the past, I don\'t have a home, a job and a good education.

So I prayed to God to have, so he provide with them to me.

>> So I prayed to God to provide for me and He did.

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