assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, Heidi!
See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
2. Where do you usually buy tickets? Why do you use that method?
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I usually buy tickets on the internet. I can get discount online and it is convenient.
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Sometimes I get some complimentary tickets from my friends and husband.
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3. Do you prefer mobile tickets or printed tickets? Why?
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I prefer mobile tickets because I don\'t need to worry about paper tickets where they are.
>> I prefer mobile tickets because I don\'t need to worry about misplacing the paper tickets.
After getting babies, it is hard to bring my belongings carefully.
>> After having babies, it is hard to organize my belongings.
1, What big problem or circumstance in your life have you been reluctant to hand over to God?
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As for the number 1, It\'s not reluctant but it\'s distrustful of help for me to look after my kids.
>> For question number 1, I\'m not reluctant but rather I don\'t trust other people to look after my kids.
I don\'t have any siblings and friendly parents.
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OR>> I don\'t have any siblings nor am I close to my parents.
How can God help me to take care of them?
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It is a big burden of me. So time to time I get a depressed state of mind.
>> It is a big burden for me so from time to time I get depressed.
2. How have you seen God provide for you and take care of you in the past?
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In the past, I didn\'t have any home, job, good education experience.
>> In the past, I don\'t have a home, a job and a good education.
So I prayed to God to have, so he provide with them to me.
>> So I prayed to God to provide for me and He did.
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