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2018-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Regine

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1.a 2.b 3.b 4.c 5.a i have a assginment to make essay, so pls correct the sentence! If you come to seoul in korea, i will recommend to you seullo 7017. You can take a public transportation such as subway, bus from Incheon national airport. I will take around 1 hor and cost 4,150 KRW. Seoullo 7017 is near seoul station. so when you arrive to seoul station, you can see it. Seoullo 7017 looks like high line park in newyork city. It was used as a rail road in 1970. but it remade for peple who want to rest in 2017. When you get there you can see a lot of people cause many people like it. There are different kinds of flowers and trees like hibiscus, forsythia, cherry blossom.. When you get there at night, you can feel different from daytime. because you can see amazing LED light under the circular flower pot. You can enjoy the fountain between may and september. I will show you short video clip about seoullo 7017.

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1.a
2.b
3.b
4.c

>>Until
 5.a

i have a assginment to make essay, so pls correct the sentence!

If you come to seoul in korea, i will recommend to you seullo 7017.

>>If you will visit Korea I would definitely recommend Seullo 7017 Seoul Korea.
You can take a public transportation such as subway, bus from Incheon national airport.

>>You can just take a public transportation such as subway or take a bus from Incheon national airport.
 I will take around 1 hor and cost 4,150 KRW.

>>It will take around 1 hour and will cost you about 4,150 KRW.
 Seoullo 7017 is near seoul station. so when you arrive to seoul station,

 you can see it.

>>You can also see the Seoullo 7017 over the Seoul station because it near from each other.
 Seoullo 7017 looks like high line park in newyork city.

>>Seoullo 7017 is inspired by the high line of New York City.

 It was used as a rail road in 1970. but it remade for peple who want to rest in 2017.

>> It was a rail road back in 1970, but last May 2017 It was open to the public for the people who would like to rest and relax.
 When you get there you can see a lot of people cause many people like it.

>>A lot of people appreciate the place so it\'s a little crowded.
 There are different kinds of flowers and trees like hibiscus, forsythia, cherry blossom..

>>You can see different kinds of flower and trees like hibiscus, forsythia, cherry blossom and many more.  
 When you get there at night, you can feel different from daytime. because you can see amazing LED light under the circular flower pot.

>>And at night you will see the LED light surrounding each circular flower pots.
 You can enjoy the fountain between May and September.

>>You can enjoy the fountain show from May to September.
 I will show you short video clip about seoullo 7017.

>>Also allow me to present a short video about Seoullo 7017.

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