Assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
If your life was in danger, who would you call and why?
I thought of my ex-girlfriend before everything else.
Maybe, she was the person who loves me the most in my life.
강사 첨삭
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Maybe, she was the person who loves me the most in my life.
Such an interesting answer~
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I thought of my ex-girlfriend before everything else.
>>I think of my ex-girlfriend before anyone else.
Maybe, she was the person who loves me the most in my life.
>>Maybe, she is the person who loves me the most in my life.
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