Assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
What are essential (necessary) items to take with you when you leave the house?
I think that my smartphone, laptop, and the money are the most essential things that I should carry.
I do almost all things with these 3 items.
I think that I also need a person whom I can spend time together with when leaving my home for long.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your opinions!
I also agree.
It is one of the most important things in my daily life.
Have a nice night~
I think that my smartphone, laptop, and the money are the most essential things that I should carry.
>>CORRECT
I do almost all things with these 3 items.
>>I almost do everything with these 3 items.
I think that I also need a person whom I can spend time together with when leaving my home for long.
>>CORRECT
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