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Are you interested in the Olympics? What do you like or dislike about them?
I can only find good effects on our nation now but I heard a lot of concerning news about Olympic when we had adopted as a host country for 2018 Olympic. Many Korean thought it was not doing too well because we was wonder do other nation want to come Korea even they thought we are still at the war technically and worried about do we facilitated enough to run the Olympics.
However beyond expectation, we are doing we well, many volunteers are helping for playing goes well. Also I can see many people are enjoying and enthusiastic about the Olympic. It seems a real sports festival in Korea.
I am really happy about and wish it finish safely so that all participants have good memories of Korea. And bring good influence for piece between North Korea through this time.
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I can only find good effects on our nation now but I heard a lot of concerning news about Olympic when we had adopted as a host country for 2018 Olympic.
>> I can only say good effects in our nation now but I I heard a lot of concerning news about the Olympics when our county became the host for the event.
Many Korean thought it was not doing too well because we was wonder do other nation want to come Korea even they thought we are still at the war technically and worried about do we facilitated enough to run the Olympics.
>> Many Koreans got worried that it might not work well because we thought that if other nations will go to Korea, they are still thinking about the war and they are worried if we can facilitate the Olympics.
However beyond expectation, we are doing we well, many volunteers are helping for playing goes well.
However beyond expectation, we are doing we well, many volunteers are helping for playing goes well.
>> However beyond expectation, we are doing well because a lot of volunteers are helping.
Also I can see many people are enjoying and enthusiastic about the Olympic.
>> Also I can see many people are enjoying and are enthusiastic about the Olympics.
It seems a real sports festival in Korea.
>> It seems that it is a real sports festival in Korea.
I am really happy about and wish it finish safely so that all participants have good memories of Korea.
I am really happy about and wish it finish safely so that all participants have good memories of Korea.
>>I am really happy about it and I wish, it finish safely so that all participants will have good memories in Korea.
And bring good influence for piece between North Korea through this time.
>> I also hope this time that it will serve as a good influence for peace between our country and North Korea.
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