Astronomical Observatory

2020-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

1.are 2.was 3.is 4.are 5.are 6.am 7.are I went to the observatory. I observed many stars,moon,sun and learned it. I thought it was the best day of my life. The most memorable thing for me is it to observe the stars. So I have a very very good day.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! Good afternoon! Thank you for your effort in practicing English.

T. Irene

1.are

>>> Correct.
2.was

>>> is
3.is

>>> Correct.
4.are

>>> were
5.are

>>> was
6.am

>>> Correct.
7.are
>>> Correct.
I went to the observatory.

>>> Correct.
I observed many stars,moon,sun and learned it.

>>> I observed the many stars, moon and sun. I learned about them.
I thought it was the best day of my life.

>>> Correct.
The most memorable thing for me is it to observe the stars.

>>> The most memorable thing for me is observing the stars.
So I have a very very good day.

>>> So I had a very very good day.

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