At 11 P.M
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I came back home at 11 pm from my work, so now I'm very tired. I've not work for long time because I've been studying in Brisbane for a month. Although I came back to my office, actually I'm not in the working mood, I still feel me like a student. I couldn't concentrate my work. Indeed, I was looking at the computor monitor all day long, so I had a headache as my eyes got bloodshot. I wanna go back to Brisbane. But it was like dream, it never happend to me again.
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Hello [이름] Oh~ I think you need some time to relax... Hmm, Go back to Brisbane? You can but maybe some time soon^^, as of now, you have to face your work. AND I REALLY hope you will feel much better SOON. Fighting [이름]! You can do it!
Teacher Joey !
I came back home at 11 pm from my work, so now I'm very tired.
>> CORRECT!
I've not work for long time because I've been studying in Brisbane for a month.
>> I've not worked for a long time because I've studied in Brisbane for a month.
Although I came back to my office, actually I'm not in the working mood, I still feel me like a student.
>> Although I came back to my office, I 'm not actually in the mood to work, I still feel like I'm a student.
I couldn't concentrate my work. Indeed, I was looking at the computor monitor all day long, so I had a headache as my eyes got bloodshot.
>> I couldn't concentrate in my work. Indeed, I looked at the computer monitor all day, so i had a headache as my eyes got bloodshot.
I wanna go back to Brisbane. But it was like dream, it never happend to me again.
>> I wanna go back to Brisbane. But it was like a dream, it will never happen to me again.
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