At last, I can tell the story of last weekend.
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Hello there,
Please, check the necessary corrections that I have made.
It is a great thing that you have time to have some fun and watch a movie.^^
I will wait for your stories.
See you in class!
Have a nice day ahead!!!!
T. Nina^^
1 AS 2 LIKE?
>>correct
2. She likes him __1_ a friend.
>>correct
3. He wanted to work __2_ a journalist.
>>like
4. I\'m tired. I\'ve been working __1_ a dog.
>>like
5. They went to the party __2_ boyfriend and girlfriend
>>as
>>correct
Or>>Wow!
I really appreciate that I can tell you the story of last weekend.
>>I am really happy that I can tell you a story about my activity last weekend.
writing this story.
>>Correct! OR I am looking forward to writing a letter enthusiastically.
>>The movie of Jun-ho Bong was released last week.
So we ran into a theater. and bought two ticket.
>>So, we ran to the theater and bought two tickets.
Until the movie started, we stayed at game room.
>>We stayed at the game room until the movie started.
The game machines are there.
>>There are a lot of game machines in there.
so we looked around that place,
and we found a toy crane!!
>>We looked around and found a toy crane.
I had a experience to catch some dolls.
>>I had an opportunity to catch/get some dolls.
I put in the money and enjoyed playing.
>>I dropped some money and enjoyed playing the game.
and I got doll at two times!!
>I got two dolls.^^
>>Then we watched the movie and it was great.
but we talked all day about the doll which I caught .
>>We talked about the dolls I got for the whole day.
I was happy!!
>>correct
bye~
>>I will tell you something about the story of the movie next time.
Goodbye!!!
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