At my friend's house,,,

Last night I visited my friend's home with my kids. because she called me.and said, " come to my house for playing tonight. MY husband will not come home ,he will work at the company for all night. " Our kids were very happy and they shouted " horray." as I said that good news. I was happy too to see my kids' happiness . We had great time there. we love our husbands but sometimes we love much more without our husbsnds . thst is housewife's day,,, ,,,.

Hi Ms. [이름], It's nice for you to send me a letter once again. Here are some corrections that you can review on    Last night I visited my friend's home with my kids. because she called me. >>Last night, I visited my friend's home with my kids. >>She invited me to come over her house. and said, " come to my house for playing tonight. MY husband will not come home ,he will work at the company for all night. " >>She said , "My husband will not come home because he has to work the whole night in his company."Our kids were very happy and they shouted " horray." as I said that good news. >>My kids were so happy when I told them the good news. >>They shouted "Hurray!"  I was happy too to see my kids' happiness . >>I was happy to see the joy on my kids' faces.We had great time there. >>correct we love our husbands but sometimes we love much more without our husbsnds >>We love our husbands but sometimes we feel more love and happiness when they're not around . thst is housewife's day,,, ,,,. This is a housewife's day...