At the theater

2011-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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There are 3 cinemas in our city. and I only go to the Yawoori cinema located in downtown. Since Yawoori cinema is located with a department store in the same building, I like going there. I can see a movie and shop at one place. Yawoori cinema is the biggest one in our city. and a theater seat is so comfortable that I can concentrte on a movie well Since the floor has a slope , I can see the screen well without the person'head in front of me. There's another advantage. I can get a discount on a movie ticket if I show my employee ID card. Because our company made a contract with that cinema.

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Wow, very impressive my dear [이름]! I couldn't see any corrections, and I commend you for a job well done.. Anyway, thank you too my dear for understanding my situation.. Talk to you again my dear.. T.Cam  There are 3 cinemas in our city. >>correct!and I only go to the Yawoori cinema located in downtown. >>correct! >>I only go to the Yawoori Cinema located downtown.Since Yawoori cinema is located with a department store in the same building, I like going there. >>correct!I can see a movie and shop at one place. >>correct!Yawoori cinema is the biggest one in our city. >>correct!and a theater seat is so comfortable that I can concentrte on a movie well >>correct!Since the floor has a slope , I can see the screen well without the person'head in front of me. >>correct!There's another advantage. >>Correct!I can get a discount on a movie ticket if I show my employee ID card. >>correct!Because our company made a contract with that cinema. >>correct!

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