At the theater
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There are 3 cinemas in our city.
and I only go to the Yawoori cinema located in downtown.
Since Yawoori cinema is located with a department store in the same building, I like going there.
I can see a movie and shop at one place.
Yawoori cinema is the biggest one in our city.
and a theater seat is so comfortable that I can concentrte on a movie well
Since the floor has a slope , I can see the screen well without the person'head in front of me.
There's another advantage.
I can get a discount on a movie ticket if I show my employee ID card.
Because our company made a contract with that cinema.
강사 첨삭
Wow, very impressive my dear [이름]!
I couldn't see any corrections, and I commend you for a job well done..
Anyway, thank you too my dear for understanding my situation..
Talk to you again my dear..
T.Cam
There are 3 cinemas in our city.
>>correct!and I only go to the Yawoori cinema located in downtown.
>>correct!
>>I only go to the Yawoori Cinema located downtown.Since Yawoori cinema is located with a department store in the same building, I like going there.
>>correct!I can see a movie and shop at one place.
>>correct!Yawoori cinema is the biggest one in our city.
>>correct!and a theater seat is so comfortable that I can concentrte on a movie well
>>correct!Since the floor has a slope , I can see the screen well without the person'head in front of me.
>>correct!There's another advantage.
>>Correct!I can get a discount on a movie ticket if I show my employee ID card.
>>correct!Because our company made a contract with that cinema.
>>correct!
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