At what age do people usually begin to work in your country?
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Here are my corrections for you:
It varies from person to person.
>> CORRECT!
OR
>> It depends, it\'s a case-to-case basis.
someone starts work since 10 years old.
>> Someone may start working at 10 years old.
they usually starts job is youtube Platform. and actor.
>> They usually start working in YouTube or work as an actor.
and the other person so late start work 30 years old.
>> Other people may start working late at around the age of 30.
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