At what age does a child become an adult

2024-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Ara

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I think a child becomes an adult at 17 years old. It\'s because when we are 17 years old, we can make Identification card. I don\'t know in other countries allow to make it at 17 years old, but in Korea, we can. Also, I think the identification card is proving to be an Korean citizen. So, we can be an adult at 17 years old.

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^^ T. Ara

I think a child becomes an adult at 17 years old.

>>> I think a child becomes an adult at 17 years old
It\'s because when we are 17 years old, we can make Identification card.

>>> because, at that age, we can get an identification card.
I don\'t know in other countries allow to make it at 17 years old, but in Korea, we can.

>>> I\'m not sure if other countries allow it at 17 years old, but in Korea, we can.
Also, I think the identification card is proving to be an Korean citizen.

>>> Also, I believe the identification card proves one\'s Korean citizenship,
So, we can be an adult at 17 years old.

>>> so we can be considered adults at 17 years old.

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