At what age would you like to live independently away from your parents? Explain.
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I think when I graduate from university or a few years later.
Because firstly, I won\'t be ready for it before then.
And also I want to live with them. But I think if I want to have pets, I would be better for both of us.
But I want to live in the same apartment with them 😂
And they said if I can be responsible, then they will let me :)
-The End
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At what age would you like to live independently away from your parents? Explain.
I think when I graduate from university or a few years later.
>>> CORRECT
Because firstly, I won\'t be ready for it before then.
>>> CORRECT
And also I want to live with them. But I think if I want to have pets, I would be better for both of us.
>>> Also, I want to live with them but if I want to have a pet then it would be better for me to live in another place but close to them.
But I want to live in the same apartment with them.
>>> CORRECT
And they said if I can be responsible, then they will let me.
>>> CORRECT
OR: They also told me that if I\'m already responsible then there\'s no reason for them not to let me live alone.
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