At what point in life does the generation gap seem to be the largest?
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Dealing with generation gap is sometimes difficult.
In my case, my mom can\'t understand me whenever I ask for permission to go out of town with my friends.
Maybe she thinks that I am still young. hahahaha!
Until I was in the university, she was the one who bought the materials I needed for Nursing. Hihihihi.
I felt the gap when I taught her for some time how to use the basic mobile phone.
When smartphones were out in the market, she was so scared to manipulate that gadget.
She thinks that the gadget will be destroyed once she use it. Good thing, she really exposed herself and tried to use the features one by one.
Now, she is already knowledgeable about the features of her phone.
Thanks for your story and for reading my essay.
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Teacher Nina
Looking at the relationship with my daughter, until recently I did not feel the generation gap that much because she was still young and did have little knowledge about the society, technology, trends, and so on.
>> Did you mean: Looking at the relationship with my daughter, until recently I did not feel the generation gap that much because she is still young and has little knowledge about the society, technology, trends, and so on.
>> OR: Looking at the relationship with my daughter, until recently I did not feel the generation gap that much because she is still young and is not that knowledgeable enough about the society, technology, trends, and so on.
However, she have recently begun pointing out my indifference to girl groups, online games, the latest pop songs, and popular smart phone apps.
>> However, she has recently begun pointing out my indifference to girl groups, online games, latest pop songs and popular smartphone apps.
The topics she is talking about among her friends are way beyond my imagination because they already started sharing information about idol starts and comparing their parents’ wealth and social status.
>> Did you mean: The topics she talks about among her friends are way beyond my imagination because they already started sharing information about their idols/ celebrities , comparing their parents’ wealth and social status.
She plays with and manipulates a smart phone much better than me.
>> correct
When I ask her “how could you do that?”, she answered “how in the world you did not know it!.”
>> When I asked her “How could you do that?”, and she answered “how in the world you did not know it!.”
I believe when children become teenagers, we start to feel the generation gap.
>> correct
It will reach the peak when they go to high school or college.
>> correct
When they graduate from college, there will still be the generation gap, however, our kids would not express it because they matured.
>> correct
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