At would age would like to become independent from your parents? Explain.

2025-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I\'m not age independent from my parents because I love my parents. But, independent are starting is twenty.

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Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good night\'s sleep! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                          At would age would like to become independent from your parents? Explain.


I\'m not age independent from my parents because I love my parents.
But, independent are starting is twenty.
>>> I\'m not independent from my parents because I love them. But independence usually starts at twenty.

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