Atheism and agnosticism are increasingly popular. Why is this?
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Because, science has come a long way. It explains many phenomena. And, in philosophy, there are many arguments that God can\'t exist.
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Atheism and agnosticism are increasingly popular. Why is this?
Because, science has come a long way.
>> Science has come a long way, that\'s why.
It explains many phenomena.
>> OR: Science has the potential to explain many phenomena and theories.
And, in philosophy, there are many arguments that God can\'t exist.
>> OR: Even in philosophy, many argue against the existence of God.
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