Attraction of baseball
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to organize a amateur women\'s baseball club. I haven\'t learned about baseball so I want to play a baseball. When I was teenager, I saw a baseball animation and practiced throwing a ball alone. It was very funny and exciting. If I organize a amateur women\'s baseball club, I want to be a catcher. Many times I imagine the feeling of catching ball, even though I didn\'t experience. Although it is a imagination, I feel pleasure when I catch a ball. I want to feel it in the reality.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I want to thank you for submitting your composition about your attraction to baseball.
Who knows you might be able to do make your own team one day, right?
I hope that you will. I guess, it will be thrilling! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> I want to organize an amateur women\'s baseball club.
I haven\'t learned about baseball so I want to play a baseball.
>> I haven\'t learned about baseball so I want to play it.
When I was teenager, I saw a baseball animation and practiced throwing a ball alone.
>> When I was a teenager, I saw a baseball animation and practiced throwing a ball alone.
It was very funny and exciting.
>> CORRECT.
If I organize a amateur women\'s baseball club, I want to be a catcher.
>> If I organize an amateur women\'s baseball club, I want to be a catcher.
Many times I imagine the feeling of catching ball, even though I didn\'t experience.
>> I imagine the feeling of catching a ball many times even thought I didn\'t experience it.
Although it is a imagination, I feel pleasure when I catch a ball.
>> Although it is an imagination, I feel pleasure when I catch a ball.
I want to feel it in the reality.
>> I want to feel it in reality.
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