August 2nd homework
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강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing about your shopping mishap. I understand how disappointing that can be. I hope you got a suitable film screen protector this time. ^^
What was your biggest disappointment when you shop online?
I ordered phone screen protection film online.
>>I ordered a phone film screen protector online.
I put a new film on my phone but it didn\'t fit.
>>I tried the new film on my phone, but it didn\'t fit.
I was disappointed that the wrong delivery.
>> I was disappointed with the wrong delivery.
So I claimed about that and the company delivered to me again.
>> So, I informed the company about the wrong delivery, and they delivered a new one.
But it was still the wrong size for my phone.
>>However, it was still the wrong size.
When I checked what I ordered before I claimed again, I was really disappointed in myself.
>> When I rechecked my order, I was really disappointed with myself.
Because I made a wrong order.
>>It’s because I made the wrong order.
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