August 4th and 5th homework
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August 4th Wednesday homework
1. I can\'t see the screen, could you swap places?
2. I\'ll trade places with you.
3. I exchanged places with him.
4. I play the piano quite well.
5. When I get old, I want to live in a quiet downtown in the countryside.
August 5th Tuesday homework
1. I go to the cinema once a month with my daughter.
2. The movie industry is not making money
because of Corona19
3. I can\'t make sentences with spoilers words.
I\'m sorry ㅠㅠ
4. The movie \"Boss baby\" is computer generated.
5. Moviegoers always wait for a new movie.
I forgot my homework yesterday, so I did it with my homework today. ^^
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August 4th Wednesday homework
1. I can\'t see the screen, could you swap places?
>> I can\'t see the screen, could we swap places?
2. I\'ll trade places with you.
>> CORRECT~~
3. I exchanged places with him.
>> CORRECT~~
4. I play the piano quite well.
>> OR: I play the piano fairly well.
5. When I get old, I want to live in a quiet downtown in the countryside.
>> When I get old, I want to live in a quiet place downtown.
>> Downtown is either the lower, or the business center of a city or town. Countryside is a rural place. So in your sentence, if you used \"downtown\" meaning business center, then it contradicts the meaning of countryside, unless you meant the lower part of a small town.
August 5th Tuesday homework
1. I go to the cinema once a month with my daughter.
>> CORRECT~~
2. The movie industry is not making money because of Corona19.
>> OR: The movie industry is losing revenue due to the pandemic.
3. I can\'t make sentences with spoilers words.
I\'m sorry ㅠㅠ
>> Spoiler(s) is a description of an important plot development in a television show, movie, or book which if previously known may reduce surprise or suspense for a first-time viewer or reader.
>> Example sentence: I want to know the ending of the movie Boss Baby. I don\'t care about spoilers because I\'m still going to watch the movie regardless of the ending.
>> Another example: I don\'t like reading comments on movies, dramas, or books I haven\'t watched or read yet because I don\'t want to accidentally see spoilers.
4. The movie \"Boss baby\" is computer generated.
>> The baby in the movie Boss baby is computer generated.
5. Moviegoers always wait for a new movie.
>> Another example: I saw a long queue of moviegoers waiting to buy their tickets.
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