August 6, Homework

Good evening Jun! ^_^

Thank you for taking the time to write your opinions as well.
I enjoyed reading them.
I would like to read more of your essays so I encourage you to continue writing.

Until the next essay! See you again tomorrow. :)
~Charry

Subject : What is the most unhealthy food you can think of ? Why? Explain your answer in not more than (10) sentences.

My answer of above question is liquor.

>> My answer for the above question is liquor.

Liquor ruins our body and mind with strong toxicity.

>> CORRECT! 

OR >> Liquor is intoxicating and it ruins our body and mind.
And we can be lazy easily because it need a detoxification to became normal condition.

>> In addition, we can be lazy easily because our body needs detoxification to go back to its normal condition.
I don\'t understand that why most Korea people enjoy drinkg liquor but it is kind of Korea culture especially for old people.

>> I don\'t understand why most Korean people enjoy drinking liquor but it is kind of a Korean culture especially for old people.
Liquor has also lot of calory that we hate.

>> Liquor also has a lot of calories that we hate.

There is nothing good to drink liquor.

>>  There is nothing good about drinking liquor.
With above opinions, i think, the most unhealthy food is liquor.
>> With the above opinions, I think, the most unhealthy food is liquor.
thanks for taking your time to read.

>> Thanks for taking your time to read this.