August 9, Homework

2019-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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Subject : Is a college education worth it ? Why or why not ? Please explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences. It\'s so difficult to say because it depends on the person and situation. Some people work based on their major like doctor, technician, teacher. For them, college education is very worth even though they spent a lot of money for their education. But unlike above them, many people don\'t work in their major industry. In a second case, can we said that their college education is not worth ? I think, if they didn\'t gradute college, they can\'t join a company because graduating university is a basic requirement to be a employee. Every education is worth but the most important thing is to choose carefully their way like major for their future.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jun! :)
Thank you for imparting your knowledge and opinion for this topic.

I agree that careful consideration and decision-making are the most important key points in ensuring a good future.
All types of education are good and I think they are all useful.
I hope you\'re having a great evening.
See you again tomorrow. :)
~Charry


Subject : Is a college education worth it ? Why or why not ? Please explain your answer in not more than ten (10) sentences.

It\'s so difficult to say because it depends on the person and situation.

>> CORRECT!
Some people work based on their major like doctor, technician, teacher.

>> Some people work based on their majors like being a doctor, a technician, or a teacher.

For them, college education is very worth even though they spent a lot of money for their education.

>> For them, college education is very worth it even though they spent a lot of money for their education.
But unlike above them, many people don\'t work in their major industry.

>> But unlike the people above, many people don\'t work in their major industry.
In a second case, can we said that their college education is not worth?

>> In the second case, can we say that their college education is not worth it?

I think, if they didn\'t gradute college, they can\'t join a company because graduating university is a basic requirement to be a employee.

>> I think, if they didn\'t graduate from college, they can\'t join a company because graduating from a university is a basic requirement to be an employee.
Every education is worth but the most important thing is to choose carefully their way like major for their future.

>> Every education is worth it but the most important thing is to choose carefully which major to take for their future.

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