authority
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that the authority is weaken more and more in complicated social system.
People require their right and power in in many ways.
One of them is legal action like sue.
Everyone hire lawyers when they face with an unfavorable situation instead of reflection.
Relatively the authority power become down .
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for this, and I agree with you, People in authority before are respected, feared off and honored. However, nowadays, we can see in our society that even police officers are not respected by others.
Just enjoy the weekend!
Aki~
I think that the authority is weaken more and more in complicated social system.
>>> I think that the authority is weakened more and more in a complicated social system.
People require their right and power in in many ways.
>>> People want to exercise their rights and power in many ways.
One of them is legal action like sue.
>>> One of them is legal action, like suing.
Everyone hire lawyers when they face with an unfavorable situation instead of reflection.
>>> Everyone hires lawyers when they are faced with an unfavorable situation instead of reflecting.
Relatively the authority power become down .
>>> Relatively, the authority power has gone down.
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