Autum

2015-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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In autum we can get autum fruits and colourful autum landscape. Autum landscapes are very colourful and beautiful. Also,autum fruits are yummy and scrumious. Examples of autum fruits:apples,pears,persimmons,acorns,gingko nut and chestnut. Gingko nuts doesn't smell very good. I have never tasted gingko nut. Examples of autum leaves colour:red,orange,yellow and brown. I like autum landscape the best. Did you ever tasted gingko nut?

강사 첨삭

Hello Emma!:) Happy Wednesday!   Thank you dear for this composition. Good job :p Anyway, here in my country we only have wet and dry seasons. We don\'t get to experience  autumn/fall and winter. I\'ve stayed in a foreign country for two years but I didn\'t appreciate their autumn season. I think it\'s because I rarely saw trees in there, just tall buildings :p Hopefully I\'ll get to see those autumn landscapes in the future. As for gingko nut, I  have never tried it too.^__^   Again, thank you for finding time to do this and please take care. Have a good night!:)^.^   ~Teacher Mayleen~     In autum we can get autum fruits and colourful autum landscape. >> During autumn, we get to enjoy autumn fruits and colourful autumn landscapes. Autum landscapes are very colourful and beautiful. >> Autumn landsacapes are very colourful and beautiful.   SPELLING: AUTUM to AUTUMN.Also,autum fruits are yummy and scrumious. >> Also, autumn fruits are really yummy and scrumptious.Examples of autum fruits:apples,pears,persimmons,acorns,gingko nut and chestnut. >> Examples of autumn fruits are apples, pears, persimmons, gingko nut, and chestnut.Gingko nuts doesn\'t smell very good. >> Gingko nuts don\'t smell good.I have never tasted gingko nut. >> I have never tasyed gibgko nut before.Examples of autum leaves colour:red,orange,yellow and brown. >> Examples of autumn leaves\' colours are red, orange, yellow, and brown.I like autum landscape the best. >> I like autumn landscapes the best. OR: I like autumn landscapes the most.Did you ever tasted gingko nut? >> Have you ever tasted gingko nuts?

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