Autum
학생이 쓴 원문
In autum we can get autum fruits and colourful autum landscape.
Autum landscapes are very colourful and beautiful.
Also,autum fruits are yummy and scrumious.
Examples of autum fruits:apples,pears,persimmons,acorns,gingko nut and chestnut.
Gingko nuts doesn't smell very good.
I have never tasted gingko nut.
Examples of autum leaves colour:red,orange,yellow and brown.
I like autum landscape the best.
Did you ever tasted gingko nut?
강사 첨삭
Hello Emma!:)
Happy Wednesday!
Thank you dear for this composition. Good job :p
Anyway, here in my country we only have wet and dry seasons. We don\'t get to experience autumn/fall and winter. I\'ve stayed in a foreign country for two years but I didn\'t appreciate their autumn season. I think it\'s because I rarely saw trees in there, just tall buildings :p Hopefully I\'ll get to see those autumn landscapes in the future. As for gingko nut, I have never tried it too.^__^
Again, thank you for finding time to do this and please take care.
Have a good night!:)^.^
~Teacher Mayleen~
In autum we can get autum fruits and colourful autum landscape.
>> During autumn, we get to enjoy autumn fruits and colourful autumn landscapes.
Autum landscapes are very colourful and beautiful.
>> Autumn landsacapes are very colourful and beautiful.
SPELLING: AUTUM to AUTUMN.Also,autum fruits are yummy and scrumious.
>> Also, autumn fruits are really yummy and scrumptious.Examples of autum fruits:apples,pears,persimmons,acorns,gingko nut and chestnut.
>> Examples of autumn fruits are apples, pears, persimmons, gingko nut, and chestnut.Gingko nuts doesn\'t smell very good.
>> Gingko nuts don\'t smell good.I have never tasted gingko nut.
>> I have never tasyed gibgko nut before.Examples of autum leaves colour:red,orange,yellow and brown.
>> Examples of autumn leaves\' colours are red, orange, yellow, and brown.I like autum landscape the best.
>> I like autumn landscapes the best.
OR: I like autumn landscapes the most.Did you ever tasted gingko nut?
>> Have you ever tasted gingko nuts?
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