Autumn season pictures
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, my teacher. :)
I upload my pictures before forget uploading.
First and second photos are took a picture whileI attend our class.
And third photo is famous mountain picture.
I took a picture in 2019.
When you come to Korea, I will introduce a lot of wonderful places.
I know that my sentence is incorrect. ^^;;
Have a wonderful day.
See you tomorrow. Bye :)
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]! Thanks for sending the pictures. :) Have a nice ahead.
T. James
I upload my pictures before forget uploading.
>>>I uploaded the pictures before forgetting them to upload.
First and second photos are took a picture whileI attend our class.
>>> The first and second photos are taken while were having our class.
And third photo is famous mountain picture.
>>> And the third photo was the famous mountain.
I took a picture in 2019.
>>>CORRECT
When you come to Korea, I will introduce a lot of wonderful places.
>>>CORRECT
I know that my sentence is incorrect. ^^;;
>>>CORRECT
Have a wonderful day.
>>>CORRECT
See you tomorrow. Bye :)
>>>CORRECT
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