avoid visiting tourists traps

2024-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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The best thing is to avoid package tours. If we travel with package tours, we are cannot choose our destinations ourselves. When you have no choice but to apply for a package tour or a daily trip, you should check the detailed plans and destinations. When traveling alone or with friends, it\'s a good idea to check reviews or clips about the destinations you are going to travel.

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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I totally agree with you! Being meticulous in choosing travel packages is the best way to avoid tourist traps. I know it will be additional work for the traveler, and most people will just rely on the package tour since it\'s convenient, which is its purpose, but it helps to still be careful.
- T. Caitlyn
The best thing is to avoid package tours. 
>> CORRECT
If we travel with package tours, we are cannot choose our destinations ourselves. 
>> If we travel with package tours, we cannot choose our destinations ourselves.
When you have no choice but to apply for a package tour or a daily trip, you should check the detailed plans and destinations. 
>> CORRECT
When traveling alone or with friends, it\'s a good idea to check reviews or clips about the destinations you are going to travel.
>> When traveling alone or with friends, it\'s a good idea to check reviews or clips about the destinations you are going to.

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