Avoiding and choosing the group
학생이 쓴 원문
If I avoid the group type to be Open chatting room like I was before. Because There are easy to join everyone with no filters. So If I join the group I will pay some money. I consider to learn Jiu-jitsu. I hope to be stronger not only my body but also mental. And I will meet some strong people.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Thomas!
It is good that you already know your next steps after the last relationship you had. This time, you make smarter decisions as well as think better for yourself. So, join groups that can give you mutual respect and can empower you to be a better person.
Thanks for your homework answer. Study sentences 1, 2, and 4 well.
Stay strong! See you!
-T. Donna~
>> I will avoid the group type of the pen chat room like it was before.
Because There are easy to join everyone with no filters.
>> Because it was easy to join everyone with no filters.
So If I join the group I will pay some money.
>> Correct!
I consider to learn Jiu-jitsu.
>> Correct!
I hope to be stronger not only my body but also mental.
>> I hope to be stronger not only with my body but also mentally.
And I will meet some strong people.
>> Correct!
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