Awarding day of a year is biggest event of my company
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> What is the biggest event held by your company?
Well. I don\'t know exact name of biggest event of my company.
I just know that there is award day for whole employees of my company. Many people join the event including CEO. Company selects people who has a excellent behavior or performance of a year. As far as I know that is the biggest event of my company.
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Hello Sir JY. Thank you for this. Since it is the biggest event, I imagine people attending the event should be in formal attire, like a suit or a gown.
- T. Beth
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Well. I don\'t know exact name of biggest event of my company.>>> Well, I don\'t know the exact name of the biggest event of my company.
I just know that there is award day for whole employees of my company.
>>> I just know that there is an award day for all employees in my company.
Many people join the event including CEO.
>>> Many people join the event including the CEO.
Company selects people who has a excellent behavior or performance of a year.
>>> The company selects people who has excellent behavior or performance during the year.
As far as I know that is the biggest event of my company.
>>> correct
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