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2. What makes you the best candidate for this position? - Many knowledge about electronics - Lots of experiences in technical sales field - With many meetings with end and OEM user then I know the method that collaborate both customer - When I make a sales forecast, I can make it success. - Many training and conferences in European country so I have global mind that ability can easily co-work with headquarter. - 3. Why should we hire you? - I was a pioneer so have very good ability to find new field and customer. - Effective and powerful sales man - have made 10 billion sales records during around 4 years. - job concentration ability is very high - have a personal relationship with related electric field with working technical sales field -very active and outgoing character in job

Hi there!! :))   Your answers are very good and you were able to bring out the thought of what you would like to say. However, it would be best if you will answer in complete sentences. So what I did was, I completed your answers and made them sentences. :)) That way, the person you are talking too will be able to understand you immediately. I hope you take into consideration my suggestion. :)) Continue practicing and writing essays in English and in no [이름]e, you will be using English without difficulty. :))   P.S. Below your composition and my corrections is a comprehensive paragraph of your answers. You can revise it or make it better if you want to.   Have a great night and I\'ll see you again tomorrow. :))   T. Jessie ^^   2. What makes you the best candidate for this position?- Many knowledge about electronics >> I have a lot of knowledge about electronics.- Lots of experiences in technical sales field >> I have a lot of experiences about technical sales field.- With many meetings with end and OEM user then I know the method that collaborate both customer>> I know how to relate with different kinds of customers  because I was able to go to to a lot of meetings with OEM.- When I make a sales forecast, I can make it success.>> When I make a forecast about sales, I make it a point to make it happen.- Many training and conferences in European country so I have global mind that ability can easily co-work with headquarter.>> I attended many trainings and conferences in different European countries so I have an open mindset about how to work with different people in the company.3. Why should we hire you? - I was a pioneer so have very good ability to find new field and customer. >> I was a pioneer before so I am very good in handling customer service.- Effective and powerful sales man>> I am an effective and powerful salesman.- have made 10 billion sales records during around 4 years.>> I have made 10 billion sales record within 4 years of working.- job concentration ability is very high>> I concentrate with the work that I do.- have a personal relationship with related electric field with working technical sales field>> Working in a technical sales before is an advantage for me in the electrical field.-very active and outgoing character in job >> I have a very active and outgoing characteristics which can help me in this job.   I believe that I am the best candidate for the position because of my knowledge in electronics and experiences in technical sales field. I had a lot of meetings with end and OEM users so I am confident to say that I know exactly how to deal and collaborate with both kinds of customers. Moreover, I  had a lot of trainings and have attended conferences in Europe. With that, I believe that I am globally competitive. Furthermore, when I make sales forecast, I can make it successful. I am confident to say that I a man an effective and a powerful salesman. I am a hard worker, active and an outgoing person.