baby

2016-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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My mum like e being a baby because now i got older and like talk to mum angrily. I like my self being a baby too because i wound't have to study and play all day. I don't have to walk because I will be carried in the carriage. i will play all days. The reason why mum wants me to be a baby is I was cute when I am a baby. All of the babys are cute.I want to go back to baby. Do you want to go back to baby, teacher Mayleen??

강사 첨삭

Hi there!:) Happy Thursday!   Thank you for this composition. I\'ve read it well. I\'ve made some modifications though.   ~T. Mayleen~   My mum like e being a baby because now i got older and like talk to mum angrily. >> My mom likes me being a baby because now that I\'m older I sometimes talk back. I like my self being a baby too because i wound\'t have to study and play all day. >> I\'d like to be a baby so I wouldn\'t have to study and just play all day. I don\'t have to walk because I will be carried in the carriage. >> I won\'t have to walk because I\'d be carried in a carrier. i will play all days. >> I\'d play all day longt. The reason why mum wants me to be a baby is I was cute when I am a baby. >> The reason why my mom wants me to be a baby is that I was cute when I was a baby. All of the babys are cute. >> All babies are cute. I want to go back to baby. >> I want to go back to being a baby. Do you want to go back to baby, teacher Mayleen?? >> Do you want to be a baby, Tecaher Mayleen?  

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