baby
학생이 쓴 원문
My mum like e being a baby because now i got older and like talk to mum angrily. I like my self being a baby too because i wound't have to study and play all day. I don't have to walk because I will be carried in the carriage. i will play all days. The reason why mum wants me to be a baby is I was cute when I am a baby. All of the babys are cute.I want to go back to baby.
Do you want to go back to baby, teacher Mayleen??
강사 첨삭
Hi there!:)
Happy Thursday!
Thank you for this composition. I\'ve read it well. I\'ve made some modifications though.
~T. Mayleen~
My mum like e being a baby because now i got older and like talk to mum angrily.
>> My mom likes me being a baby because now that I\'m older I sometimes talk back.
I like my self being a baby too because i wound\'t have to study and play all day.
>> I\'d like to be a baby so I wouldn\'t have to study and just play all day.
I don\'t have to walk because I will be carried in the carriage.
>> I won\'t have to walk because I\'d be carried in a carrier.
i will play all days.
>> I\'d play all day longt.
The reason why mum wants me to be a baby is I was cute when I am a baby.
>> The reason why my mom wants me to be a baby is that I was cute when I was a baby.
All of the babys are cute.
>> All babies are cute.
I want to go back to baby.
>> I want to go back to being a baby.
Do you want to go back to baby, teacher Mayleen??
>> Do you want to be a baby, Tecaher Mayleen?
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