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2017-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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Hi, honey. how was your day? Did babys give a hard time to you? Yes, as always. And I'm afraid I have some bad news. What's wrong? AA seated on the sofa playing with fire truck. BB was lying on the living floor for a few minutes. I went to my room to bring a diaper for BB. It was very short time. At my room, I heard a some big sound and then BB started to cry hardly! I was surprised and I ran to the living room. and I saw BB's forehead was being black and blue. , the fire truck was next to B. When I stared to my sun AA, he was embarussed. He might throw the fire truck to my daughter. I don't know that He did on purpose or not. Anyway it is hard day. and she has cried loudly since then.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

It\'s good to know that you find some time talking to your wife. Taking care of the children every day is quite a battle. AA is starting to be playful so I think he didn\'t hit his sister on purpose. It\'s a tough day for your wife but it feels even more relaxing to know that you\'re a safe haven for her. I am a bit worried for BB\'s bruise though. Please let her be checked by a pediatrician right away.

Have a great day!

See you around!

~Teacher Eunice


Hi, honey. how was your day?
>> Hi honey, how was your day?
 Did babys give a hard time to you?
>> Did the children give a hard time to you?
Yes, as always.
>> CORRECT!
 And I\'m afraid I have some bad news.
>> I\'m afraid I have some bad news for you.
 What\'s wrong?
>> CORRECT!
 AA seated on the sofa playing with fire truck.
>> AA seated on the sofa while playing with his fire truck.
 BB was lying on the living floor for a few minutes.
>> BB was lying on the floor for a few minutes.
 I went to my room to bring a diaper for BB.
>> I went to my room to get a diaper for BB.
 It was very short time.
>> It was very quick.
 At my room, I heard a some big sound and then BB started to cry

hardly!
>> While I\'m in my room, I heard a loud noise and then BB started
crying very hard!
 I was surprised and I ran to the living room. and I saw BB\'s forehead

was being black and blue.
>> I was surprised so I ran to the living room and I saw BB\'s forehead
was bruising.
 , the fire truck was next to B.
>> I saw the fire truck was next to BB.
 When I stared to my sun AA, he was embarussed.
>> When I stared at AA, he felt embarassed.
 He might throw the fire truck to my daughter.
>> He maybe threw the fire truck to his sister.
 I don\'t know that He did on purpose or not.
>> I don\'t know if he did that on purpose or not.
 Anyway it is hard day. and she has cried loudly since then.
>> Anyway, it was a hard day and she was crying loudly since then.

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