Baby Shark

2022-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

I would listen to baby shark because this song is for kids so I can listen it with my family, and also it is addictive so I think I can listen it all day long.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I used to listen to that song too when I take care of my nephew. It\'s very addictive.

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I would listen to baby shark because this song is for kids

>> I would listen to the song \"Baby Shark\" because it is a song for kids.

so I can listen it with my family, and also it is addictive so I think I can listen it all day long.

>> I can listen to it with my family and it is also addictive. This is why I can listen to it all day.

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