Bad Condition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I hope you get well soon.
You have to take care of yourself.
Be careful with what you eat and keep yourself warm because it\'s getting colder in your country.
Anyway, I wish you fast recovery from your sickness. Take a rest well.
_Teacher Dianne ^.^
I got a cold in Saturday and I went to the hospital on Monday.
>> I caught a cold on Saturday and I went to the hospital on Monday.
I hurt my eardrum too.And these days I have a stomache too.
>> I hurt my eardrum and these days, I usually have a stomachache.
December is the end of the year.
>> December is the last month of this year.
But my condition is becoming bad.
>> But my condition is becoming worse.
Bad Condition means sick.Most of all, I got a severe stomache.
>> Bad condition means being sick and most of all, I got a severe stomachache.
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