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2012-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Put in the verbs in brackets in the Gerund or the to-infinitive. 1) Are you thinking of (visiting) London? 2) We decided (to run) through the forest. 3) The teacher expected Sarah (to study) hard. 4) She doesn't mind (working) the night shift. 5) I learned (riding) the bike at the age of 5. Hi,Chloe. Let me review on last class. We talked about the skills students should be taught. I insisted that the social skill is essential for them rather than critical thinking. And I suggested the reason with my experiences during my high school days. But I thought I failed to explain the reason why it is essential. So, let me suppliment the reason now. I claimed that I achieved the social skill through the soccer club and the president classroom, and after graduated, the ability enabled me to be admired and recieve chances from people who worked with me. Likewise, the skill is the most important for student's future. I will give you futher reasons in upcoming class. See you.

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Hello Sir [이름]! Good afternoon to you! Wow!  You almost perfect your homework! Good job!  Anyway Sir, please do not think that you were not able to express yourself in giving out your reasons. Don't think that you failed. You are not a failure Sir [이름]! Aja! You can do it. Okay? I will talk to you later then Mr. [이름]. -Teacher Chloe Put in the verbs in brackets in the Gerund or the to-infinitive.1) Are you thinking of (visiting) London? >>Correct2) We decided (to run) through the forest. >>Correct3) The teacher expected Sarah (to study) hard. >>Correct4) She doesn\'t mind (working) the night shift. >>Correct5) I learned (riding) the bike at the age of 5. 5) I learned to ride the bike at the age of 5.Hi,Chloe. Let me review on last class. >>Hi, Chloe. Let me review our last class.We talked about the skills students should be taught. >>CorrectI insisted that the social skill is essential for them rather than critical thinking. >>Correct >>I insisted that the social skill is more essential for them than critical thinking.And I suggested the reason with my experiences during my high school days. >>And I sited my expreriences during my high school days to explain it.But I thought I failed to explain the reason why it is essential. >>CorrectSo, let me suppliment the reason now. >>So, let me suppliment my reasons now. >>So, let me further explain my side.I claimed that I achieved the social skill through the soccer club and the president classroom, and after graduated, the ability enabled me to be admired and recieve chances from people who worked with me. >>I claimed that I achieved social skill through co-curicular activities. I joined soccer club at school and I was the president of our class. When I graduated, the ability enabled me to be admired and to receive chances from other people to work with them. Likewise, the skill is the most important for student\'s future. I will give you futher reasons in upcoming class. See you. >>Moreover, I can say that social skill is the most important to student's for their future. I will give you other reasons in our class. See you!

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