Bad manners what I hate.
학생이 쓴 원문
First, I hate making a big sound in elevators or public places.
Second, I hate making a big sound when people are eating together.
Third, I hate playfully people are tricking me.
Finally, I hate discriminating against others.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Kindly check the corrections. :)
Thank you~
- T. Rina
1. First, I hate making a big sound in elevators or public places.
>> Firstly, I hate people making a loud sound in elevators or public places.
2. Second, I hate making a big sound when people are eating together.
>> Secondly, I hate people who make noise while eating.
3. Third, I hate playfully people are tricking me.
>> Thirdly, I hate people who playfully trick me.
OR: Thirdly, I dislike people who play tricks on me.
4. Finally, I hate discriminating against others.
>> CORRECT!
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