bad mom, good dad

2019-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I believe that it had better father doesn\'t intervene when mother is scolding their children. If parent are scolding children simultaneously, which affects bad influence to their children emotionally. one of parent should be comfort the children after scolding of another parent.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Fred. ^^


We briefly talked about this last night, right?

Thank you for sharing more of your thoughts. ^^

I agree with you.

It is important for the child to feel loved and not ganged up on.

See you on Monday!



~t. Ally




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I believe that it had better father doesn\'t intervene when mother is scolding their children. 

>> I believe that it would be better for the father not to intervene when the mother is scolding their children.


 If parent are scolding children simultaneously, which affects bad influence to their children emotionally.

>> If both parents are scolding their children simultaneously, it would have a bad effect toward their children emotionally.


 one of parent should be comfort the children after scolding of another parent.

>> One parent should comfort their children after being scolded by the other parent.

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