bad movie

2013-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Our house is ___d___ then theirs. a.big b.more big c.biggest d.bigger 2. He is ___c___ of four children. a. older b. old c. the oldest. 3.Tortoises live ___a___ than cats. a.longer b.more long c.the longest d.long 4.Electrical goods are usually ____d__ in America than in Britain. a.more cheap b.cheaper c.the cheapest d.more cheaper 5.The Nile is ___the longest__ river in the world. a. long b. lobgest c. longer Today, I mean last Sunday, I and my girlfriend went to theater. We saw the movie which of name is 'the flu' the flu is contagious disease so the mayor had a choice. It is lethal to people, so If it once spread all of Korean will be dead. the mayor decided to block the city. and soldiers hit the citizen. The story of movie was unreasonable. I was angry with it. We are protecting our people now and have protected until these times. but the director think soldier is so stupid even hit their people. I thought my money was wasted.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

You only committed one mistake in your homework so congratulations!^^

Keep up the good work.^^

But, I feel sorry to know about what had happened to you last Sunday.

It might not be a good movie but this experience may serve as a lesson.

If you are going to watch a movie, you can probably check some information

about the content of the movie so that you can have an idea about its content.

Take care of yourself and enjoy the rest of the day!^^

~~T. Nina~~

1.Our house is ___d___ then theirs.
a.big
b.more big
c.biggest
d.bigger
>>Correct.

2. He is ___c___ of four children.
a. older
b. old
c. the oldest.

>>Correct.
3.Tortoises live ___a___ than cats.
a.longer
b.more long
c.the longest
d.long

>>Correct.
4.Electrical goods are usually ____d__ in America than in Britain.
a.more cheap
b.cheaper
c.the cheapest
d.more cheaper

>>cheaper
5.The Nile is ___the longest__ river in the world.
a. long
b. lobgest
c. longer
>>Correct.

Today, I mean last Sunday, I and my girlfriend went to theater.
>>Today, I mean last Sunday, my girlfriend and I went to the theater.
We saw the movie which of name is \'the flu\'
>>We saw a movie which is entitled \'The Flu\'.

or>>We watched a movie entitled \'The Flu\'.
the flu is contagious disease so the mayor had a choice.

>>The flu is a contagious disease so the mayor had a choice.
It is lethal to people, so If it once spread all of Korean will be dead.

>>It is lethal to people, so if it spreads, all of Koreans will die.
the mayor decided to block the city. and soldiers hit the citizen.
>>The mayor decided to block the city and the soldiers hit the citizens.
The story of movie was unreasonable. I was angry with it.
>>The story of the movie was unreasonable. I was angry with it.^^
We are protecting our people now and have protected until these times.
>>We are protecting our people now and have protected them until these times.
or>>We have been protecting our people until now.

but the director think soldier is so stupid even hit their people.
>>But the director thinks/thought that a soldier is so stupid and even hit their people.
I thought my money was wasted.

>>I thought my money was wasted.^^ 

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