Bad sleeping
학생이 쓴 원문
I lose my head in sleep all day long.
I must need to sleep at least 3-5 hours.
If I didn’t sleep well, I drowse for taking class and want to eat some strong coffee.
I know drinking coffee isn’t good for me.
Actually I don’t know It’s effective method.
But drinking some beverage and trying to wake up inform that I have the [이름]imum conscience.
So, bad sleeping before is hard to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jady!
You can make simple sentences.
Now, let\'s focus on learning new patterns.
You can use them to improve your work.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I lose my head in sleep all day long.
>> Correct
I must need to sleep at least 3-5 hours.
I must need to sleep at least 3-5 hours.
>> I must sleep at least 3–5 hours.
If I didn’t sleep well, I drowse for taking class and want to eat some strong coffee.
If I didn’t sleep well, I drowse for taking class and want to eat some strong coffee.
>> If I don’t sleep well, I feel drowsy during class and want to drink some strong coffee.
I know drinking coffee isn’t good for me.
I know drinking coffee isn’t good for me.
>> Correct
Actually I don’t know It’s effective method.
Actually I don’t know It’s effective method.
>> Actually, I don’t know if it’s an effective method.
But drinking some beverage and trying to wake up inform that I have the [이름]imum conscience.
But drinking some beverage and trying to wake up inform that I have the [이름]imum conscience.
>> However, drinking something and trying to wake up shows that I have at least some awareness.
So, bad sleeping before is hard to me.
So, bad sleeping before is hard to me.
>> So, poor sleep before is hard for me.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.