bad strategy
학생이 쓴 원문
It is the worst problem that there are too many universities in Korea.
It was resulted owing to wrong and irresponsible university policies of government.
I insist on abolishing unnecessary low-level universities.
Like now, if we accept foreign students indiscriminately, the academic quality of university become lower rapidly.
They have only interested in solving financial pressure.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
How are you?
You seemed busy these days. Anyway, I still appreciate that you spent some time writing your thoughts on our homework.
See you in class.
Aki~
It is the worst problem that there are too many universities in Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
It was resulted owing to wrong and irresponsible university policies of government.
>>> It has resulted owing to wrong and irresponsible university policies of the government.
I insist on abolishing unnecessary low-level universities.
>>> CORRECT!
Like now, if we accept foreign students indiscriminately, the academic quality of university become lower rapidly.
>>> Like now, if we accept foreign students indiscriminately, the academic quality of universities will decrease rapidly.
They have only interested in solving financial pressure.
>>> They are only interested in solving financial pressure.
>>> They only have an interest in solving financial pressures.
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