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Today is a voting day. But it is a little different from common vote. Today we don't choose one person who we prefer to. Just vote for the better policy about elementary school feeding. One policy is school feeding free perfectly and the other is free partially At first, the mayor of Seoul promised the former idea when he ran for the mayor of Seoul. It was his one of the main policies for winning the election. But for carrying out this policy, there are many problems - money, fairness between the rich and the poor, and the challenge to the next presidency -.I think the last reason is the hidden but main one.

Hi there [이름] [이름]!! Just continue sending your compositions and continue improving your writing skill. Keep it up!! Talk to you [이름]n then.   Today is a voting day. >> CorrectBut it is a little different from common vote. >> But it is a little different from the common voting system.Today we don't choose one person who we prefer to. >> Today we don't choose one person whom we prefer to.Just vote for the better policy about elementary school feeding. >>We will just vote for the better policy about the Elementary school feeding program. One policy is school feeding free perfectly and the other is free partially >> One policy is school feeding that is free for the whole population of students and the other is free only for a given number of students.At first, the mayor of Seoul promised the former idea when he ran for the mayor of Seoul. >> At first, the mayor of Seoul promised the former idea when he ran for the mayorship of Seoul. It was his one of the main policies for winning the election. >>It was one of his main policies for winning the election. But for carrying out this policy, there are many problems - money, fairness between the rich and the poor, and the challenge to the next presidency >> Correct [dont forget the punction mark at the end]  -.I think the last reason is the hidden but main one. >> I think the last reason is confidential but definitely the major one.