bad vote? 2
학생이 쓴 원문
For running for the next presidency, he needs to get some kinds of results, for example getting rightness through the democrotic vote.
So, through this vote, he wants to check this idea again and change his promise from totally to partially. Moreover he bet his position on this vote. if he loses, he will resign.
But it is not easy to change the first promise because it is the reason why he elected to the mayor.
강사 첨삭
Continuation:
For running for the next presidency, he needs to get some kinds of results, for example getting rightness through the democrotic vote.
>> Because he is running as the next president, he needs to gain the trust of the public through his actions.
So, through this vote, he wants to check this idea again and change his promise from totally to partially.
>>So through this vote, he wants to check the pulse of the people. He will then decide if his decision is final or not.
Moreover he bet his position on this vote. if he loses, he will resign.
>>Moreover, he is betting on his position through this election. If he loses he would resign.But it is not easy to change the first promise because it is the reason why he elected to the mayor.
>>But it is not easy to keep his promise because he was elected as the mayor for this reason.
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