bad vote? 3

2011-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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Some people are rejecting the vote and arguing keeping the promise. If the vote rate can't reach 33.3%, this vote will invalid. So, they call this vote bad and tell people not to vote today. They think this causes unfair situation on the lunch table for the children and it is related to the right of life of the kid. Actually I am not sure which one is right. But anyway I could not vote today. I had no time to vote. What is the real right thing? and who will smile at the end of today?

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Continuation;   Some people are rejecting the vote and arguing keeping the promise. >> Some people are are rejecting to vote and asking him to keep his promise.If the vote rate can't reach 33.3%, this vote will invalid. >>If the vote rate won't reach 33.3% this votation will be invalid.So, they call this vote bad and tell people not to vote today. >>So, they are calling it bad vote and they are asking the people not to vote today.They think this causes unfair situation on the lunch table for the children and it is related to the right of life of the kid.>>They are thinking that it will cause discrimination on the children's lunch table. It has something to do with the children's right.Actually I am not sure which one is right. >>Correct But anyway I could not vote today. >>Correct  I had no time to vote.>> CorrectWhat is the real right thing? and who will smile at the end of today? >> What is the right thing to do?  And who's going to smile at the end of the day?

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