badminton test
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today, we had a badminton test at school.
i got a A in short service but I got a B in long service
In our class only 3 got both As. So, our teacher said that we will have the badminton test again because our scores are not high. i think i need to practice long service. The direction that the shuttlecock i hit wasn't straight and also, my arm didn't go passed my shoulder after hitting the ball.
It's quite hard if we need to get both As.
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Hi Kevin^^
You've got to look at the bright side of everything. Getting an A in your short service is excellent, B is not bad, in fact it's great! Through your letter I could see that you really made it through your test, you're one of the best players in class^^Hope you'd get an ace on your second badminton test. I know you have lots of potentials in you, keep practicing and keep reaching for your goals! Here are the corrections I've made for you.
T' Joan
today, we had a badminton test at school.
>>We had a badminton test at school today. OR
>>Today, we had a badminton test at school.i got a A in short service but I got a B in long service
>>I got an A at the short service but I got a B at the long service.In our class only 3 got both As.
>>In our class only 3 of us got an A on both service.
So, our teacher said that we will have the badminton test again because our scores are not high.
>>CORRECT!
i think i need to practice long service.
>> I think I need to practice doing the long service.
The direction that the shuttlecock i hit wasn't straight and also, my arm didn't go passed my shoulder after hitting the ball.
>>The direction I hit the shuttlecock wasn't straight and my arm didn't pass my shoulder after hitting the ball too. It's quite hard if we need to get both As.
>>It's quite hard if we need to get As on both service.
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