Bae Myeong's food
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Hi, [이름]!
How I wish I could also taste the food in your school. T_T
You just made me hungry when you said the food was delicious.
Anyway, take a rest well.
See you again on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Bae Myeong\'s food tates wonderful.
>> Bae Myeong\'s food tastes wonderful.
Today,I ate sausage and kimchi and meat soup,and rice cake with rice.
>> I ate sausages, kimchi, meat soup, and rice cake with rice.
The food was delicious.
>> correct
There will be a chocolate milk and banana milk on Friday.
>> There will be chocolate milk and banana milk on Friday.
I have to ran to school cafe because I\'m really hungry at that time.
>> I had to run to the school cafe because I was really hungry at that time.
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