Baemyeong festival
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! Then it\'s another day to enjoy tomorrow.
Tell me about the things you\'re going to do.
I hope you win. ^^ Good luck!
Enjoy your school\'s festival tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Tommorrow is Bameyeong festival.
>> Tomorrow is Baemyeong festival.
We enjoy the show.We can enjoy all of things. Playing game,watch entertainment show,eating,watching exhibition and so on can be afforded.
>> We will enjoy the show and we can enjoy a lot of things like playing games, watching entertainment shows, eating, watching exhibitions, and buying anything that we can afford.
It started at 8:50 and ends at 4.
>> It will start at 8:50 am and ends at 4 am.
I will eat a lot of snacks and lunch.And I will partcipate many games and get a gift.
>> I will eat a lot of snacks and lunch and I will participate in many games and get a gift.
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